Wednesday, October 11, 2006

ONE RAINY DAY

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Rain, rain falls on the street

mud in puddles I clean my feet

Thunder, thunder rumbles and roars
close the windows, lock all doors

Clouds, clouds black and grey
heavy with water to drop all day

Sun, sun is breaking through
clouds are moving, the rain stops too

Rainbow, rainbow across the sky
seven colours delight my eyes


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7 Comments:

At Wednesday, October 11, 2006 8:35:00 AM, Blogger rainbow angeles said...

So pannai berpuisi wan... :P

 
At Wednesday, October 11, 2006 9:02:00 AM, Blogger Unknown said...

thought u are really MCC... but so good in puisi... hahaha.

I continue my version...

Haze, haze attacked our country
polluted air makes life difficultly

:P

 
At Wednesday, October 11, 2006 10:28:00 AM, Blogger sun, moon & star said...

Good, good but you missed out the streaks of lightnings leh

 
At Wednesday, October 11, 2006 1:41:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

wow! ..poetry boleh !!!

 
At Wednesday, October 11, 2006 7:55:00 PM, Blogger dreamie said...

angel :
nolah, tis was in my dreams last nite !! ... hahaha

kenny :
waah your version goodie! i contd sumore...

Quick, quick run faraway
go for a holiday

Home, home again when it is blue skies
life will be like weather so good and nice


SMS :
too thick the haze, cant see la !

Gusty :
kekeke... play play oni

 
At Saturday, October 14, 2006 8:42:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

waahhh so sentimental wan.

 
At Monday, October 16, 2006 2:19:00 AM, Blogger dreamie said...

ah pek - sentimental to laam orang ..kekeke

 

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